Thursday 2 October 2014

HAIKU_FNL

GOD
By: Regiena Gaviola A_112014103


You are my father
Never let me feel alone
With your loves and cares

4 comments:

  1. The Haiku is well done and relates to the topic. Yet, I think you need to check whether the words "love" and "care" are countable :-)
    I wish all the best for your study!
    -Thanks-

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  2. Hey regiena! ;)
    your dad never lets you feel alone, right? Then, if you have spare time, just make that time for your quality time with your dad. Make him feels "my most beautiful daughter never lets me feel alone, she always has precious time for me". hehehe :D

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  3. Mr. Calvin : okay sir. thank you so much for your advice :) God bless you

    Mutiara : hahahha yes, i always give my time for my Heavenly Father:) thanks mutiara;;)

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  4. love and care your God like your God does Regiena by praying every time

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